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Old 10-10-03, 10:12 PM   #21
CrazyE
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Mentally HopeIn He Words Got Me Shook And Concerned
Supposedly Kursed But Even Your Avy Looks Like A Nerd
*LOL , GOOD PUNCH , FUNNY ASS SHIT 8.5/10
You Cleanin Out Ya Closet, Bitch I Be Keyin' Up Ya Face Lift
Sayin You Lethargic Wit Ya "Key" Would Be An Understatement
*NICE LINE , NICE RYTHMES , CLEVER SHIT 8/10
"It's" Gibberish, Funny You Try'ta Be Hot When You Deliver It
Forget It Kid, Work Domino's If You Want Heat Wave Privaleges
*LOL , ANOTHER GEM , YOUR ON ROLL KID 8.5/10
Ignorant, This Bitch Mental Dope? Peeps Dont Even Consider It
Merkin Shit?, You Not On My Page Givin It, Your Livin In The Bitch
*AIIGHT SLOWED DOWN A LITTLE , STILL DECENT VERSE 7/10
Spit It Belligerent, No1's Stoppin Me, You Aint Holdin Shots Ta Me
Killer Spit, My Punches Got Ya Hed Spinnin Like Moldin Pottery
*NICE LINE , DECENT CLOSE , NICE MULTIES AND FLOW 8/10

40/50 80%





Leavin you "dead on arrival" like premature babies born wit distorted lungs//
"Torture your mouth" like a esophagus drowned in saliva and hung from a tongue//
*AIGGHT , LIKE IT BETTER 2ND TIME I READ IT , CLEVER SHIT 8/10

Collapse your life like disabled lungs, rip your veins out until no blood remains//
Infill red dot aimed to split ya thoughts and shatter your brain splittin your crane//

*LUNGS AGAIN ? , AIGHT LINE GOOD FLOW , KINDA PLAYED RYTHMES 7/10
You get "whats cumin to you" like playmates in bed, raped in a thread//
Like Sean Paul, watch these bullets stick to your brain like glue leavin you dead//
*NICE RYTHME , GOOD WORDPLAY , TOP HALF WAS BETTER 8/10

Saliva cloggin your windpipe, like drownin in spit, you choked//
Punches leave your jaw like a Tampon period, bloody and swollen, then broke//
*PLAYED OUT , SIMILAR TO YUR 1ST LINE , LOL AT BOTTOM HALF 7/10

Ill pass you a L to the left of your seven makin you meet the number two//
Duckin like your crew leader bein called out for slips, not comin through//
*GOOD PUNCH , HEAVY , DECENT OVERALL , NICE FLOW 8/10

TOTAL 40/50 80 %


TIE
However , since it took 3 days to write this ........................... Imma Have to go with Eyes

no beef , close battle , peace to both

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