BOTH RAPPERS CAME IN AND WERE POETIC DESCRIPTIVE AND COLORFUL WITH RHYMES......
knight you gave me my start with a collab if i remember right......so i had to critique this harsh and fairly.

this peace was off the rock....
the hook alone sets up expectations of detailed rhymes and harsh concepts where neither of you failed to do anything less then captivate the reader.
another factor was taking words whos' spelling doesnt rhyme but portraying them in a manner that does.

i give this a ten and hope you post more often.