This is a great read- Fresh topic, Hard hitting imagery, good flow..
A Deep Hatred Grew Through A Young Boy, Maybe Two
Of All That Were Deemed Unfit, Niggers And The Jews
I really loved the opening lines, they kept me reading... even though the Using A Capital At The Start Of Every Word is kinda labourious to read.
Swinging The Axe Of Racism, A Disease Plagueing Clean Land
^^ Perfect.
The second stanza delivered the poem to the reader, serving vindication if you will. I believe all poems needs a strong closing, and this one had it -
The Whole World Stood Up And Cheered, But Hitler Hit The Floor
Really enjoyed this.. Thanks for the read
