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Old 10-11-03, 01:51 AM   #2
Tourniquet
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This is a great read- Fresh topic, Hard hitting imagery, good flow..

A Deep Hatred Grew Through A Young Boy, Maybe Two
Of All That Were Deemed Unfit, Niggers And The Jews

I really loved the opening lines, they kept me reading... even though the Using A Capital At The Start Of Every Word is kinda labourious to read.

Swinging The Axe Of Racism, A Disease Plagueing Clean Land

^^ Perfect.

The second stanza delivered the poem to the reader, serving vindication if you will. I believe all poems needs a strong closing, and this one had it -

The Whole World Stood Up And Cheered, But Hitler Hit The Floor

Really enjoyed this.. Thanks for the read
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