Props to my 2 fav boiz!

13th you have good vocabulary and everything, and I'm learning how to do better with structure and stuff from you.


was December a holiday?,a celebration for the messiah bein born
Jesus is the way,the truth,the life..then why do i steadily mourn
my rain steadily pourin..an illusion or time to think outside the box
christians/jehovah witnessin missions said my mind is unorthodox
^ I like it that you take religious facts and use em in rhymes, we both religious and thats koo!

~Props BoO~


KinghtShade

you had the longer verse, and it was interesting to read

Fav lines
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To leave me alone, just give me some time for myself for once.
The constant harrassment, pacing through wastelands to water fronts.^^^^^ I FEEL YOU!
Back and forth, heaven to hell, a pulsating rhythm within my mind.
And once my mother leaves again my heaven glistens and shines.
This rhythm defines disorder, bitching and Complains.


Good Job!


Keep it commin'

~D-I-M-E-Z~
aka LadyD

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