Personal piece... I agree with filed, that the emotional value carried me over the small grammar and flow problems, all in all, there isnt too much to pick out of it though.

The ending is very good, I do think however that you should leave it at -

Lifes made for living,
And from this moment....
We will begin to start living it.

And forget the last 2 lines, if they are a part of the poem. That way, you are leaving the hurt behind, in a past life.. and now, building a new one together for a brighter future. I dont know, seems more power in that, instead of returning to past pains over and over in life... will never get ya moving forward

Nice read, and best wishes for you and your man

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