I've been thinkin to myself..when I battled Tu Centz did my verse really suck..or did he just happened to rip me?..I am requestin that someone break my verse down in to parts..possibly by bars and tell me what yall think..was it good,bad,or anything else..here is my verse:

You got a 'Diamond Mind'?/
You must be thinkin' 'cubic zirconia'/
My aim game is 'priceless' whenever I start zonin' ya/
With bars that with 'melt coal',I aint nothin nice/
You think U got a chance of winnin?,I'll jus put yo 'thoughts on ice'/
Make U take the knife to yo wrist,slighty slice up/
Cause U 'ampetatin' yo arm' is the only way you'll have 'diamond cuts'/
Kidnap yo girl,dime or slut,I'll have her insides missin'/
They say a 'diamond is forever',well I'm about to break tradition/
You'll think I'm tossin' plates the way I'm throwin disses(dishes)/
Your crew said U was ill,I knew it was superstitions/
Call me a grave robber the way I'm diggin' up old bones/
And givin you rotatin' losses like numbers on old telephones/

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Originally posted by Tu Centz
You Couldn't Get Wins Against Vets, So He Chose Herbs 'Instead'

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It's good to know that U tellin' yo opponents the truth/
Call me a 'retired boxer turned dentist' the way I'll 'knock out yo tooth'/
Ran out of punches so you decided to knock yourself out/
Dumbass wanted to 'drop from Diamond Mindz' so he thought he could 'rock hisself out'/

as you can see I have alot of disses towards his crew..do yall think I should have made more direct punches to him?..lets get some feedback..