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Old 10-11-03, 09:27 AM   #8
LM
Drop Of Genius
 
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From: The promised land
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First off. In kru-cial's verse where he says,
"Battlin' me u jus' hit a wall of bricks,
now its about time u called it quits," It sounded awfully familar to Rabbit Run on the 8mile soundtrack. Thats not good.
Secondly he used the same rhyme scheme for the majority of the verse which just bores the reader.

Hehateme's verse was more creative. And the cockyness towards the end with the blahs and yawns was very effective.

My vote goes to Hehateme
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