Auspicious- You had a pretty good verse, but it was full of weak punches..."you're on crack"..."oompa loompas are gay" that sorta stupid shit. Nothing really stuck out to me, made me laugh, or made me think "shiet, that was dope!". Your flow sucked, and that isn't good. Okay wordplay, but it didn't really hit hard enough.

Fgee-Your verse wasn't that great either, but it was better. You wordplay seemed more thought out, and it was easier to understand. The Jenna Jameson line was funny as fuck, if a little played out. Your flow also needs working on. Pretty good, man.

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