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Old 10-11-03, 01:04 PM   #12
Dirty Sally
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That was good. Good wordplay, vocab and the hook was catchy. The flow is on point, my only suggestion would be to switch the 2nd and 3rd verses, it would flow better that way. Other than that I think it would make a good audio. Stay active fam. One+
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