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Old 10-11-03, 01:38 PM   #3
pot1ent
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I'm not one of your cock jockeys...But i can be paid...lmao

Don't atke that shit serious...Fo real

The topic was good..Your meaning behind lines was amazing ..What you wanted to say was said clearly
..That was really prominent in this piece..But i felt your flow fell of really quite badly.. I think you need some work on that
I understand this came from the heart and was a vent for your anger and frustration from your life and i repsect that..Maybe thats why it was really good.. Either way you dropped some really deep lines

Return the favour on ...::Matter Over Mind::...

Pz
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