Ladies and gentleman, boys and girls, friend and foes, pimps and symps this is HaycH newst member to rapbattles.

This is one of my poems called "Another day" gimme some feedback.
Here we go...


Just another day
Another dead
Feeling no pleasuer nor pain
Thinking whats the gain
No excuses for being useless
Mind starts to penetrate
With thoughts of assassinate
finish how i start
Is that my sole solution?
Fear is about the only thing im feeling
As i start spraying into the ceiling
They start kneeling
Its me against me
Notion against notion
Mind confused
Heart bruised
Can i out wit my own shadow?
Is this the path I`ve chosen to take
Or did it choose me?
Warm tear runs down my cheek
So warm i start feeling weak
As I faintly see the poe-leece
Hands start to shake
vision starts getting blury
scream escapes my dying lips
As i drop my last clip~



Another night will be up tomorrow.