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Old 10-12-03, 02:23 PM   #11
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THE AVALON BREAKDOWN..!


(ya'll know I don't vote on battles... in FL... but...)



Calda... Let's see... I'll go line for line...

We Chill, I'll Give You That Much.. But When It Comes To It.. You SUck ! -
Enuff.. I'm Comin In Wit Kicks For Laughs.. Cuz I Dont Even Need A Punch -

Mmmmmk... for an opener... blah'k... set it was BLAH... punch was ok... should have been worded better... not bad though... Av says... 5.5...

Battle? You Cant Be Serious.. So Humor Me -
Its Like Sayin You Got Ure Period.. b4 You Hit Puberty -

Nice... played... but nice... I like what you did with it... I don't know why... Just did... Av says... 7.5...

Cut U Up In Two Or Three, Just To Laugh At Ure Pieces, Its A Tough Life -
Im To Rough Right? You Could Piss Me Off.. If You Did It Upright (piss standing) -

LMAO... nice... nice... for what it was... shit was nice... Av says... 7.0...

Expose This Bitch, She Knows This Shit, Leave Her Open Like Sandal Holes -
Punches? She Cant Handle Those, Stick Her From The Waist Like She Had Camel Toe -

This line was your best... rhymescheme flawless... punch was ok... but the rhymescheme carried it... great diss... Av says... 8.0...

Mad At My Verbs, Tragic For Hers.. Defeat her Wit Magical Werds -
Battles Infered.. That I Took The 2 Bitches In Her Sig And Added A Third -

Hum... I usually don't like punches like this... and this was no exception... but i do em... so... Av says... 6.5...

34.5 outta 50... not bad...



MMMMMMMmmk... Lady... here we go...

I Pack-The-Hits,Grab-Ya-Dick,Cuz It's Like A Crappy Armageddon Da Way I'll Impact Ya Shit
it’s Like This! Calda’s My Friend So I'll Throw "Peace Punches" The Way I "Pass A Fist”

better opener... the set up was pretty blah... but the word play was ok... wow... that's still a blahk... oh well... could have been word better... Av says... 6.0

Ya Rapz Are Dull In “Desperate” Need Of Change & All I Can Spare Is Ya Life
But Calda Is Merdered! You Jus Scared Of A Mic Tore Through Ya Flesh Like A Knife

I'm sorry... I didn't feel this at all... ok play of his name... but honestly... nothing stood out... Av says... 5.0 cause it rhymed...

Brutally Pound Ya Octics With Phone Keys, Till Ya Pupils Begin To Dial Eight
My Stylez Great! Biting Cleopatra’z Scriptures & You Stoll Can’t A-Nile-Ate

Hum... pretty good wordplay... not a big diss/punch... but you could have done more with it... Av says... 6.0...

Cant 'Defeat-My-High-Ends' This 'Dude-Lies-Tense' You 'Need-My-Guidance'
You Jus One Of Them Kats That’s Sound Better With Silent, This Chickz 2 Violent

The line would have been better if you dropped "this chickz 2 violent" but good multis... great rhyme scheme... Av says 7.5...

Damn Homme You Too Soft, But Anywayz Nice Attempt!
Placing Pennies Under Scopes Is Calda’s Way Of Being ‘Mag-Ni-Fi-Cent’

Hum... a played line... I think you could have done a little better with it... not a bad closer though... Av says 6.0...

30.5 outta 50...



Av says... Vote: Calda Merda... better set ups... better punches... You both need to elevate but not a bad battle... You should go another round... seriously...


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