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Old 10-12-03, 04:39 PM   #12
13th Disciple
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Yo, look here everyone at how I'm beating this homo
When I punch him he sees red like developing photos
weak opener...but decent wordplay
You can't touch me, I'll always come out being doper
He's not a straight up fag, cuz he's usually bent over
not really feelin this...i'mjust bein honest
If this rap shit doesn't work, then ya skills must hone
& remember you always have my knife to fall back on
not bad i guess...
Kid's a joke, I'll pimp this kid out to a mute Chinese lez
& Have him taking more shots to the mouth then Sky Lopez
decent
Here we go again, Tak always slobs on all of the men
He didn't come outta the closet, his dad wouldn't let him in
lol...i liked this one...good wordplay and punch
I could stop right here, and let all his buddies ride.....
Right into the ass-whoopin, on the corner where he built his pride
good
Cuz that's the only way that you could've won the title bitch
If God created men equal, he took a lot away from Taktik
feelin this one too
I'm done with this clown, did ripped a hole in this dude
Think about it..
me and evolve posted in this thread that's 2 people already doper then you
okay closer...


Quotient, Axl Prose or whoever...I'll still beat you despite......
Seen my shit coming...and begged Evolve for an extra night!........
nice opener
If you didn't know, he's Axl Prose, lettin' you know so...........
You don't vote for a guy who sends these kinds of secret photos..........
good personal
Forget protection of truth, I'm straight disecting this dude........
Seein he must of neglected the Half Assed section of rules!.......^^^
not bad...decent punch
Combined with a library of names and pages of faulty text........
There's no question why, when he seen me, he renamed Always Less!.........
nice play on his name...
Ain't hard to see this cat's shit so pre-writ it's signed B-I-C!........
And he couldn't salvage a Double-U if stuttering between T-&-V!.........
again..nice wordplay..good setup
Tired of the annoying youth thinkin' they got somethin' new......
Here...how bout I toss this Tux over this Cliff...Now Follow Suit!!!........
nice punch and wordplay
I'm on one site and you're on like 50, here comes the reflection......
This cat enroled himself in Art Lessons...still dont Draw Attention!!.......
good
Beware of the bones that break when you witness my shit and intake.......
Because I ain't even here for the win...just defining Heavy from Lightweight!!!.......
real nice closer



Quo...i think u underestimated this cat....Taktik came wit better
wordplay...punches...and threw some good personals in there...
ur verse was okay....had about 2 quotable punches in there...

vote=Taktik
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