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Old 10-12-03, 04:48 PM   #8
Taktik
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Damn this was truely an ill battle................could be a Legend piece..........

13 Disciple

Very good verse........you had many hard punches...........many that i went oooo and ahhh at..........then there was some that i went huh? The problem you had was stayin consistent........as there was some lines i jus wasnt feelin............you had good flow and good wordplay..............but overall it was a nice verse

13th's Quotables - 42/50

time 2 abort,challengin the champ?!,postin up is simply irrelevance
Av said i'm soft...so i emailed him my dick for hard evidence.....

lyrics soaring...no need to hype it up make claims wit my boasts
cuz while i'm droppin bars Avalon competes by droppin freeposts

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Avalon

Very nice verse as well..........some nice personals.......and very nice punches.......you were better with consistency, altho your verse had its faults...........you and 13th were fairly even with flow, wordplay and personals..........but you took punches

AV's Quotables - 46/50

13th's jokes only... and kids... it's not hard to down him,
check his roster, only question is why clown...? When they all around him...

speakin of crews I'm combustible... see the chemical forming,
13ths' the back burner, Av' "head of the pack" like surgeon general warnings...

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Breakdown

Punches - Avalon(more consistent)
Personals - Even
Flow - Even
Wordplay - Even
Structure - 13th

Overal Vote: Avalon
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