Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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this was a good piece!! very sad and dead feeling
it was short with simple cut lines
made it a nice read
and also made each line stick out
to make you take in what it was saying
it was a strong deep topic
one that sometimes ppl ruin it when they cant open
get their feelings, message across
but it worked for you!
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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