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Old 10-12-03, 05:24 PM   #3
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From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin
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this was a good piece!! very sad and dead feeling
it was short with simple cut lines
made it a nice read
and also made each line stick out
to make you take in what it was saying

it was a strong deep topic
one that sometimes ppl ruin it when they cant open
get their feelings, message across
but it worked for you!

~Tera~
DONT HATE
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