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Old 10-12-03, 06:13 PM   #5
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iight

this was a strong piece, full of hate and i feel some regret.
it starts off good, taking in some of the good in the world
then it picks up a little looking back and wishing
then boom it hits that 3rd piece was my fav coz its where it starts up, and in this piece doesnt really go down. which is a way a writing i like sometimes, and in this piece it fit, leaving it in our own minds to how the outcome for this man will be. nice

~Tera~
DONT HATE
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