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lol nice intro before you piece
the intro to your piece didnt really pull me in all that well but i liked the line structre so i kept reading
in this you made some pretty good points, that got me thinking
such as

Its me against me

who else do we really need to fight, its only ourselves that we should fear the most and its what we do with ourselves that matters

Is this the path I`ve chosen to take
Or did it choose me?

this was my fave part because there plenty times that i think around those lines, sometimes i wonder if im even living the life im suppose to maybe its some1 elses, coz it doesnt feel right

all in all it got me thinking and made some good points, just work on your intro and expanding things some

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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