iight

this here i liked alot, for the fact that it was so well drawn, and ever thou i dont live throu the same pain, i could feel it i could taste it and hate it for what it was talking about, for all the pain and fustration it causes ppl in this world, not really beliving that ppl can overlook their children like that. i think you did a great job in venting in this piece, and STILL keeping good structure, vocab abd flow going. nice

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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