Personally, I think bluntness is just fine if it's elaborated enough to extrapolate some decency in it.

This peice specificly is just... well... no offense but it reeks of conventionallility. Which is to say, it's rather basice and conventional. Who knows, you might have an amazing poetic talent, but this wouldn't be an example. No hate though. It's just that's all I'm saying.

~Islam~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.