this was good......

first off lemme break down WL

"TWIST:
Sorry Mommy and Daddy, The Last Thing I Wanted You To Go Through
My Death Was a Premature Escape, I Wasn't Due
People Will Judge Me On This Tragic Event
It Gives Them a Reason To Gossip, An Unspoken Consent
I Can't Do Anything To Make These People See
The Image of My Death Was a Mistaken Identity"

this i think was really good i liked the whole twist u put on it to sho another side of the situation .......voerall that was the best part in ur verse.....the other lines were good too i liked these aswell

"They Celebrated The Turning Of Becoming Eighteen
Nobody Guessed It Would End In A Gory Crime Scene
Passenger Wasn't Wearin A Seatbelt
Went Through The Windshield, The Pain He Felt
When You Die, Your Life Flashes Past Your Eyes
Did He Get To Enjoy All Of Life's Emotional Highs"
~~~~~~good shyt overall id give this a 8/10~~~~~~~~~
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My names break down verse-

"Somebody stop him, It's his Schizophrenic taking place,
Only if i had a voice in this, but no1 hears my case,
I'm the good in you, Release anger upon another object,
Just not ya wrist dude, There's a future due to project,
I hope i'm not too late, But the good in you is all used up,
At least that's what your doin, Tryna act hardcore n tough,"

this was good i liked it...nice creativity

"Memories to reveal, What your takin away...is more than i can deal,
They say the good guys win, Though your death letter is sealed"

very nice closer.....id give this verse a 7.8/10
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overall i think this goes to WL.....no hate just his verse was a lil better good shyt from both.....1