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aight um...i havent voted on text in a while - but what the hey im bored
duke's verse::
aight man your first 2 lines i was feelin - i mean that shit just read real well - wasnt really a punch but i was likin it fo some reason
after that man you kind of just got sloppy - i mean if you can keep shit like your first two lines i think you could elevate alot and do some good shit here
kliniks verse :
wasnt feelin your opener - reminded me of some icp shit -
the delirious shit was hot cuz you reversed - added a nice little punch - good shit
some advice - i would cut down the "computer" refrences "submit reply, keyboard." not that your lines were whack its just youll prolly get cracked on for it...itsallgood
but this battle goes to klinik - his shit had more punches, flowed better in general.. whatever - str8 battle
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