lol love the name...
aight this was long...

nice little autobio...nice way to get into the site
flow was ok... need to start saying them aloud to get equal lenght on them
vocab and word choise needs to be upped... listen to more people speak and see how you can say one thing 30 diff ways..lawyers are good at that
good drop

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85236