it was a short piece but the word i think of when i think of this is
cute, not trying to offend you but it was okay for the shortness,
it didnt really sound just like some crazy writing but it definately
did not sound the same as others. I think the usage of me really
made me not like it. I just dont know if it is poor grammar or that
is just what you felt like putting. over all it was not that bad, next
time just stretch it out a little more, put more content. Keep
writing.

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