i enjoyed your rhyme scheme, it is similar to mine (my style) but
i dont put all the big words. In this it sounded great but
sometimes you can have more with less. Know what I mean?
You content was good, you didnt really go off subject, but in parts
of it , it looked like you were just trying to find words that rhymed
just relax poetry is feeling in words.

FAVORITE LINES

"Should we not all be happy with our self
Then we are dealt with this belief
Be unique… like everybody else"


but i think that you could have put it into a better sequence.
overall it was a decent read, worth it. Keep writing.

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