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IP:
The hook was good, i think you could have done something more creative...but you did flip it an make it humerous so that was tight lol...
but onto your verse...great spit man, it came hard an really repped ya shit...
For every thousand m.c.’s that came and put in work..i leave 500 sleign the other 500 murked-
Very unique, pure fire...the way you worded it it came out nicely..good shit
For Claimen they hard with bars and got that ass touched like a cavaty search.
For every line you made there’s 50 you kill claimen you ill…
but foreal played-
You couldn’t come off the top if you were getting a fade.
I aint in this for the buissness , I flame raps then extinguished rappers finished.
Extra crispy…. Blemish your image in a scrimmage .so fuck yall!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Also very dope lines....you could feel the energy and how you wanted it togo...very ill
You give brains to get A~HEAD and couldn’t even FORWARD a phone call.
And I rep VA like Very Arrogant Verbal Assasin.
While you rep an area code where they call you an asshole and has been.
There’s 2 type of m.c.’s besides me-on the M~.I~.C
Those with ovaries- and those that cram N.U.T’s in they ass cavaties.
That’s whyThe day I get signed im a spit nine and start billing-
My record label for the track and contract killing.
^^lol....very well writtin..flow i found hard but wen i caught it...went nicely with your words an multi's great lines
Ive been doing this since before the PONY EXPRESS-
Give me 20 minutes you’ll be impressed….
on how I address lines and deliver text to the world faster then fed~ex.
No Im not arrogant and this aint a complex-
But you say you’re the shit and I agree in a different context
Those bars were fucking ill as hell...the fed -ex line wa dope, and i felt that flowed the best...just cause it was nice to read and it had a great sence to it...good wordplay there
You like ALCHALICS ANONOMYOUS….when you drop bars-
Your groups congratulates you but nobody knows who you are.
I spar- with hooks and punchlines keep my my focus ample-
Then let rappers sample if we ever battle- grapple your adams apple-
And twist it off like the cap of a Snapple.
^^whoa lol..creativity was mad there...with the boxing thing and you being focused that was very unique...good multies there
Fuck hip hop!!!!!! this commercial bling shit got me anoid-
I stay fresh dressed rocken sean john but hate reject labels so fuck BAD BOY.
Fuck any cat that forgot what this is aboute-
So if you soft and say your hard hitten im knocking you the fuck out.
36 times one for each tooth in your mouth-
AND GIVE YOU A ROOT CANAL THE SIZE OF 95 NORTH AND SOUTH.
Great ending bars....i felt those lines really made you realize how hard lines can get...just because you said plus finished around it then...very dope...all in all very well writtin and the punchlines were dope...crazy flow and great metas man...keep it up peace
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