it was aite... when i read it i found myself wandering off.. the topic was somewhat okay.. and ur flow wasnt too strong.. i could feel the hits but it seem like they werent stinging... still the vocab was nice.. structure got better throughout the flow and like everyone said... multis can heighten skills... keep elevatin and good drop.

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Remember my fist your lips an the blood around your face kid
Heard you wonna comite suicide, im santa an i no where you live
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man.. lol shits not all dope but it made me smile... one.