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good drop homie, very well writtin, nothing really to critque but ths line really made me see potential..
"My Lord has need of these flowerets gay,"
The Reaper said, and smiled;
"Dear tokens of the earth are they,
Where he was once a child.
"They shall all bloom in the fields of light,
Transplanted by my care,
And saints, upon their garments white,
These sacred blossoms wear."
^^...very well wrote , good imagery...good creativity as well...peep myn faith..
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