pretty cool, fell off abit at times i think, but i dont think you had a good time with this topic lol

"Flesh covering my blood a smile covering my hate
A knife opening my woons God questining my fate"

kinda witty there lol, althought you had spelling mistakes everywhere. flowed perfect on them two lines, nice opening.

"Torpedo launched of words out of my mouth again
Not holding back shots im declaring future disaplin
To whom may think they real but causing disfunctions
Glancing at the poor an rich with quick assumptions"

Again, flowed well, this topic was a kinda cross between self-portrayel and poverty in a sense.


"Freestyling words that dont even make sence
Unrevealed vocubulary like invicable loneliness
Ghost writtin formulas to the equation of unheard
Equally a fake emcee on'a platter bout tobe served
Yeah you have ambiblicale chords but you was cut off
For your style bein limp your forever gunna be soft"

HaHa. This was madd this section, really interesting with the "Unrevealed vocubulary like invicable loneliness," i thought that line was the dopest, and was really creative.

"Invasion of lyrical insanity anounced at this oppertunity
Giving me the richisnous to appose the certifiicate of insanity"

That was line was alright, but really in internals, you shouldn't use the same word twice, unless you can do something creative with that word like eminem - "I pop two pills, till my pu-pils swell up like two pennies"


"Free willing an application of a death centance of emcees
Trying to say they writtin wit suspence but really wonna be's
Second guessing wordplay an metas questing whats a verb
How you suppose to write when you dont even no "word"
Herbs with out roots trying to grow with out photosynthisis
Cant do it so dont try you dont have the suns ray pencil giveness
Until the exodus of my name isnt 15-2 i give you this apeal
That i aint finished with clowns words yet unrevealed"

Nice way to finish, although you had loads of spelling mistakes throughout the whole peice, unless you designed that for originality i dont know.

overall this deserves a 7/10

(i dont consider any piece either hardly 9/10 or 10/10, as this considers it perfect)