They take all one's hopes and dreams
And flush them down the toliet
Like your nothing but a worthless piece of crap
So you do what they all don't expect
You do the unexpected and go off to your own little world
Where nothing can stop from doing what your gonna do


^
that paragraph / stanza
was great i think that itself could have been a great poem ( of course
using a lil rewording)
but you held a big impace
with jsut that lil part alone

great job