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Old 10-13-03, 01:24 PM   #11
HazY.B
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short
yet
great

i loved the easy read this poem gave off
it was simple from line
one to the end

but yet it held
such a powerful impact

was really wonderful to read
such a great peice\

i loved this line:

This Pain Yo, Is Driving Me Insane Slow

altho youe rpeice was more on an open mic tip ( i felt
it was still a grace to the poetry room
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