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Old 10-13-03, 01:44 PM   #18
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flow was dope, vocabulary was dope, multis were dope, only problem is u lost me in some parts man, rhymin too much got me in the flow more than ur topic know what i mean nice shit would be better to hear in audio but here's u best line to me

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pot1ent's best line:
Liable to not be admirable and have implications in creation
If we're def to what manifests then its detrimental potential
Intentional conventional progress leaves hope compressed
Express Impress with science being perpetual exceptional
Whats Correctable? Only the scale of the tactical process


now, like i said, this was the dopest part of ur piece, but u rhymed so much u lost me in what u was trying to get to, overall this a good piece, nice rhymes good vocabulary and flow

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