most pieces are slept on, n newbie, if you gonna post, leave some decent feedback dumbass... ill break it down for ya


Topic: like it, really felt it, its not played at all either.

Wordplay: wasnt really any but, to me, seemed more of a style that doesnt call for it, it was a great drop by its self, vocab was good, didnt over elaborate, yet wasnt to simple.

FLOW: another style thing i liked it, but i like rymes so i wasnt feeling it too much, but for the style of the piece it fit well, structure an complexity were deff there supporting your emotion in it, kinda have to picture the emotion threw the experiences you listed, liked that idea.

Overall: 9/10..


yo if you want, wanna return the favor to my post a world so cold, being slept on too...

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=83926



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