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Old 10-13-03, 10:47 PM   #11
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actually...........i beg to differ, I think MJ took this tho

I was feeling her disses alot more, think it came out stronger


This Bitch is Tryin to Be Hard, Drivin Around Lookin Pretty In Painted Flower Cars
^^^ an iiight line
But She Couldnt Even Spit Two Strong Lines if Mary~Jane Ate Power Bars
^^^played out, all those candy bar type lines are played.....
Guess She Thought I Was Scared A Females, Now Shes In a Mess for Women Textcees
^^nothing really hittin
(Puts Skirt On MJ) Here Put This On....... Now You Can Be A-Dressed Correctly
^^^nothing really again
Mary~Jane I’ll Take My Blade & Halve Ya Brain, Now Make A Split-Decision
^^^this is played and since today this is the 5th time ive seen this line
Even If I impaled Ya Toungue With A Protractor U Coulnt’t Spit Percision
^^^nice
You Couldn’t Outsmart me In Punches If You Fought Mimes With Clever Hands
^^not bad
Dismembered Strands,Ya Talent Ain’t Seen Like Live Kids Walkin Out Michaels Neverland
^^^^^^ that shit was ill right there, no doubt about it

wether the personals were true or what, it didnt hit that hard to say...

the bobby and whitney line was good

Divinity Is Endin This Battle So FAST No Photographer Could Capture The Moment
^^^ that was tight

MJ started off okay
battlin me you like blinds walkin in traffic, cuz u lackin the sight
^^^ played

In this race you were lazily pacing when instead of bringing beef you brought canadian bacon
So I’ll leave you smoking like Jamaicans, and return the favor by making YOU the canadian bakin
(nice)

the microsoft/excel was nice
I'll put you in the same position that yo father does, cuz your life is `over girl` !!LMAO!!
(LMAO LMAO LMAO)

the [representing proffesion/1 in ya mouth] line was nice, i understood it


basically MJ took this with more consistent & harder punches

Flow = Both
Punches = MJ
Personals = Both
Wordplay = MJ
Creativity = MJ
Metas = Lady Div
Structure = MJ
Consistency = MJ


i think u ppl need to read MJ's verse more

no hate to both, just honest feedback

goodshit from both

Lady Div needs to be more consistent wit it