im swordsman morse so withouth the "S"/
finesse? a concept i comprehend less/

good line but the filler above gave it a lack luster apeal.work on setting your punch.

i cant take it easy it just cant be done/
like tryin to c walk after drinkin a gallon of rum/

not bad ive seen used but not in exact context.....
you need more complexity and punches that are filled with metaphoric terms.
you got structure and you arnt wack.....just need to build.

stay up and elivate twin.