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Old 10-14-03, 09:03 AM   #1
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Post Feed This....then I Will Return Favour

IP:

flows breeze OUTRAGEOUS, wordplays CONTAGIOUS,
the impact of words, reputations lead now FAMOUS/
ignorance under the blanket, illness is still CONCEALED,
explanations you need, like MAGICIANS tricks REVEALED/
switch vocabularly stance, still reaching higher PLAIN,
rap and rhyme prose content, 5 mic award ATTAINED/
metaphor analysis, strugglin shows "can't handle THIS",
Master of ART spittin, LYRICAL creatin HIP HOP FISTS/
preparations before, but in hindsight, PREDICITABLILTY,
firin blanks in retaliation, like MEN got INFERTILITY/
and this hostility, just in jealous awe of my RAP-ILL-ITY,
sickness defined wit rhymes, written in pyscho ward FACILITY/
eradicate the weaker OTHERS, drop gems that UNDERCOVERS,
elevation proportionate to uk figures, increasing NUMBERS...of SINGLE MOTHERS

i feel it flows well....but i can see in other styles how it won't....

whut y'all think
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