ain't i not seen your spits before....will look at them from now on tho...you defo a vet, cos i seen the rhyme scheme and flow that you seem to hav made yours, its creative and original and works,

if i a being negative, the vocabularly is not too complex or techincal, but to be fair you hit the topic with the vocab and wordplay you choose:

Now we got a bunch R.KELLYS’ and NELLYS’…
maken currency off of these YOUNG ovaries.
That’s why I question every rappers sexuality-
perform TRANSEXUAL surgery if they battle me.

i can't really say much more negative, or positive, i think i wanna see some more of your spits that you do aight....this was for the first spit.....

it was a good solid drop.....just wanna see some more to see what you like in general, not neccesarily on a topic....

peep my drop, it only 14/16 bars