there some pretty dope punches in there:

yo, you you couldn't hit me if you had a scope an a hype dis........
my verbal barrage will leave ya mic lifeless, it's like this.......

which flowed well like the example above, or did nt flow too good like:

compatible illuminate mics, i know it's not right but the virgin mary wasn't even this tight......

and:

compatible affected you from the day you was born he made you wack from the womb just so you could labor the storm and end up gettin' torn apart in this open mic forum......

i think.....that if you structured it wit a more strict guideline, it would flow better, and therefore the punchlines you got in there that more creative then the others would shine, but it ain't on par....

good creative punches, but other things need improving....tho i think it got a message across....keep droppin

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