This piece shouldn't be slept on, you had a really good concept hidden it there B, i really felt it. I suppose it painted a picture of war, i could imagine the children crying as the bombs fell, and the soldiers in the trenches. Its wierd coz often the meanings of poems are not clear, they can be deciefered in different ways, which i think is true with this piece. The topic of war is a played one, but i think you made this uniquly yours as in you didnt write the normal shit that every other fucka writes on the subject.

good drop

respect