Da-Prophecy's Verse

Brace-ya-form for the force I’m bringing, ya shit just makes-me-yawn
It’s like you ready to steal autumn the way you bout to “take-a-fall”

First line extremely weak punch. 2nd line was nice shit.

You insane-to-call me out, I got the brains-and-brawn to break-ya-jaw
You skilled? Doesn’t “ring a bell(e)”, like French bachelors afraid-to-call

First line has good flow...but no punches(I don't consider "break-ya-jaw" a punch...it's just in there to fit the flow aka filler. 2nd line had good wordplay, but it was a weak punch.

WP just fakes-he’s-raw, he’s getting smoked quicker-than-small-blunts
And even with red crayons, this dim witted bitch-couldn’t-draw-blood

First line's played. 2nd was nice

Proph-bringing-raw-stuff, equipped to leave Word~Perfect's-jaw-fucked
The closest u’ll get to “bakin” me is the fact that ya script-is-a-“bore”-son (bacon, boar)

Stop talkin about yourself...every line should be focused on dissin the other person. 2nd line was okay.

And the proof of that’s in his name, watch Perfect “drag on” in his rappin’
The worst you could do to me… is remind me you’re in my faction ---

First was decent. 2nd was okay.

Overall it was a decent verse. Your flow is awesome. You lack the punches to match it though. You had a few good ones in there, but all flow and few punches makes it a much weaker verse.

WP's Verse

the PROPHECY is the prophet~sees no profit-so stop it-
you tried to get in whos ass?this fags~just~mad im cock blocken..

1st was decent, 2nd was funny...but a fag line.

either your ego got this kid gassed-or he a comedien who catches laughes-think 1-1 means something?It only proves your half ass.

First line filler, 2nd line was eh.

Acting like you at my level,but cant see M.K.C-You my clone, get off my dick MINIE ME.look it up in the dictionary....an OMEN is a PROPHECY-they go synonomously-

First line Filler. 2nd line was EXTREMELY stretched and pretty weak.

but it don’t apply stop dreamin-you only share my style when you spit my semon.

First line filler. 2nd wasn't very hard hitting

see the PROPHECY came true- and so did the OMEN...I just FUCKED YOU!!!!!!!

Wasn't feelin the last line at all....sorry

Overall I think Da-Prophecy had a much stronger verse. Definitely had a better structure, edged WP in the flow. DP's verse had much harder hitting pucnhes also. Good battle ya'll but

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