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Aint no drug got a hold of me (keystye)(plz critique)
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10-14-03, 11:59 AM
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frozen with heat
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it was an aiight drop, nice wordplay, if you didnt giv ya last post i wouldnt of believed it was a keystyle.
only thing wrong with it was the structure, try an balance otut e number of words on each line
aiight peace
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