Okay Okay

Your flow was good with a solid structure.. You had good vocab and rhymed complex words.. so props on that

You didn't need to cap your rhymes.. people are quite capable of finding the rhymes when they read it.. Not that bigger problem though.. The scheme seemed basic but however did work

You spat your ideas thats all i can say on the topic of topics< lol

Pz .. Return the favour on one of my pieces with the same length reply.. you may have to use your brain to find what you really liked.. but do it.. thnx