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Old 10-14-03, 02:57 PM   #22
C_Drama
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it's sad dat player writes to verses and still loses easily

tss....tss

kok wasnt that bad

Is like his souls "trapped between realms" cuz he's half bad, half good- (heaven & hell)
^^^played......
Laid out in da streest in69 positions is only time you've been to the hood-
^not bad
How can you be a true "player" with 90% played out lines?
^^lmao
But you already got "pussy", its "under your belt" see them panty-lines?-
^^lol


haha not even going hard, lemme spice it up a bit

He came back "from da hood" reaching in his pockets and all he felt was "noughts"- (nothing)
^^ nice
And you gon 6 more pre-written verses just to even the odds-
^lol
The way I throw so many punches it feels you got jumped 79 times-
^okay line
Leave this man's fingers looking like permanent gang signs-
^lol
>>>>>>>>>>>>player<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
yo0o Ill put my gun in mouth n make u my SLAVE
^^ weak
iur lyrics r copied by some who coppied a COPPYER
^^you really need to elevate kid

caskit doesnt ryhme wit biskit.....you must b really white to think that


punches = kok
flow = kok
personals = kok
multis = player
consistency = kok
structure = none (both needs improvement)

both needs elevation tho

vote= kok