iight

i liked the way you didnt even think about structure in this piece because there was to much feeling emotion love and hate in this to get side tracked with structure.

the message in this was strong and clear and it got acrossed its message. except at the end that last line or so, it changed from getting stuff you want, ect, to making ppl fall in love with you, but it wasnt a biggie.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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