salvation - "hands in the air" (snippet)

its still 2:30 .. so listen .. your reaction is what tells me if i should finish this or not .. so, give honest critiques .. i was basically just seeing how far i could go "commercial" w/o being considered a sell out .. listen to the lyrics .. its not that car / money / ice shit .. i kept the lyrics grimey .. just did some shit different .. lemme know ..

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