^I guess you didn't read it.
this was wack. hate to break it to you, but it was 3 verses of basic wordplay, terrible flow, and a stupid topic. write about something more meaningful. If you need practise join the topical league.
I can't even be bothered to help you, sorry. I'm just gonna say, you need to elevate everything.

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