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Old 10-14-03, 11:10 PM   #2
gotaloveforrap
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aight homie my opinion is this was a weak diss........i thought ur structure was pretty weak........i never really caught onto ur flow......ur vocab was ok, but ur rhyme scheme sucked.........ur wordplay definetely needs to be elevated........next time try and include a few more multis and metas.......good try though......keep postin and elevatin homie.....

peace........
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