PUnches: X
Multies: Game
Flow: X
Structure: X, i like it its like mine
Metas: Game
Wordplay: X
Similes: X

X Took This, I Didn't Really Like Mac 11 or -One- Or Whatever He Is Called Nows Structure Very LONG Bars And A Bad Rhyme Scheme, But In The End X Took This.. Good Job X

Vote = X

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