ok, not that bad of a drop but it was pretty simple...flow wasnt bad, vocab could use work, maybe could have used some multies too...overall it was ok, keep dropping though....

cant take it easy it just cant be done/
like tryin to c walk after drinkin a gallon of rum/

^prolly what stood out the most to me in the peice...

if you get a chance could you peep my latest open mic...and hit me up with some feedback...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85644