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please please please look at this peice, Roses Die
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10-15-03, 04:45 AM
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nice piece, you kinda had an eyedea type rhyme scheme goin on, u lost point on what you were writin, other than that this piece wasnt that bad, nice vocab, needs more multis, other than that ill piece.keep elevatin.~1~
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