ok, flow was good, vocab wasnt bad but a lil on the simple side in parts...rhyme scheme was kinda basic also....structure was pretty good...content was good....felt like it had alot of emotion in it...it was a nice drop...like everyone else said, it had a poetic vibe to it...enjoyed reading it...keep dropping yo

and if you get a chance...could u hit up my latest open mic and leave me some feedback...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85644